Hello guys, Sorry for not coming to class on wed. didnt feel well, a bit better though, If you need to share anything about the class just come and say it in here! Hanieh
Hi, here we go! Looking forward to seeing your postcards in here!h
Hanieh Akbarimehr ;)
Hi everybody,finally i understand how to write here!:D Mona KH
well done you! :d Dear Mom I'm having an intresting time here in India,there are many great places to visit. The foods are delicious and very spicy,I love their foods very much.The weather is nice and I think the temprature is about 18 degree Centigrade.The hotel is very beautiful and clean but it's very expensive! Yesterday I went to a big temple,it was very crowded,a lot of indian people were there for praying. Tomorrow I'm going to go to a gift shop,I want to buy souvenir for you. See you soon Mona
*Note comments in ( ).
Thanks Mona, nice job, just be careful about spelling and Capital letters, well done! It is a nice postcard note! Thanks! Hanieh :)
Come on Mona:) ,It's really fine, don't worry, just try not to repeat these mistakes again. c u tomorrow:)! Hanieh
Dear teacher I correct my mistakes ,i think! can you check it again for me??? Thanks alot! mona ;) It's checked now!! Just two more super easy ones! Pay more attention! :) Hanieh
looool.How about now???:D Thank you so much Mone, it is fine now! well done! :) Hanieh Mona
Oh my god!!I have alot of mistakes!:(( Mona
Dear Lila
I am having a fabulous time (time is C or UN?) in Turkey.
My hotel is near (Not necessary here) the sea,the weather is so cool and little humid.There are great restaurants
with tasty local foods and wonderful desserts.(I do agree with this part ! :D)
Today I`m going to water amusment park.I had a fun(glad is not a right word here!)time and i (again!) get a little sun burn.
Tomorrow I (?? CAPITAL LETTER) `m visiting historic district after that I `m going to (not necessary here, I AM GOING SHOPPING) shopping to buy souvenir.
see you soon !
Fatemeh
Note: My comments in (...) .
Excellent Fatemeh, very well-written post card, but just go over my comments and correct your mistakes with another color and then come again to check whether they were true or not. Thanks again, Hanieh:).we are
Thanks Fatemeh for the corrections you made, well done! Go over them again, there are some that you didn't found out. Hanieh
DEAR NAZLI
Im having a great time in Antalia .
We are staying in a five star hotel, near to beach(near beach) , weather is fabulous and foods are international and more delicious than i ever eat.
( more delicious...... correct this part please) The most delicious food ever! <<<=== you can say like this!
Today my parents take (took) me out to a local restaurant.
Tommorrow(tomorrow) we are going to go shoping to buy souvenir and then our guide will take us to some historical places.
It's going to be a lot of fun .
See you soon .
Nazanin.
Excellent Nazanin, thank you so much, yours look like Fatemeh's, but that's fine. Check your mistakes out and try not to make those again:), thank you again. Hanieh
Thank YOU so much Nzanin for teh corrections you made, well done! :) Hanieh
Dear Hanieh Akbarimehr(?)
Im having a(?) intersted(?) and hobby(extra) time here.
The hotel is very greate and clean, the food in a (?)hotel and city (you need a verb) yummy,the weather is very good but a bit hot.
Today im going to shop(going to shop???) and see old place.
Tommrrow(spelling has problem) im going to hause(?) also going to park,Esfehan is a very beutiful city.
See you soon
I love you so much my honey.
Rozhin
Hi Rozhin, Thanks for your nice post card, just go over it again and try to correct your mistakes. I have written (?) in fron of them so that you will know where to change.
After 'dear' don't write the family name, just first name is enough. Thank you again :)! Hanieh
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Hi my teacher, this is my short article about my routins.
After the English class I come back home with my Dad. ('I' IS ALWAYS CAPITAL!)
As soon asI arrive home I take off my outfit and winple(?? is this right?) then i wash my hands. I Help my sister to set (you need an article here) lunch table.
I eat with family and we talk or watch tv during lunch.
Then I take a nap before(spelling) that I wash(article??)our dishes.
I do my home work and study new lesson.
when I finish that, I rest for half or one hour , listen to music while i take (an article??) break...............
At night, I eat some fruits for dinner then I want (use another verb instead of prepare) to(....and the preposition) sleep, first Iwash my face and brush tooth NextIchange my clothes and go in bed.
Good night.
Fatemeh
Thanks Fatemeh, nice job, good usage of the adverbs but please go over them again, I have mentioned the parts you need to change in ( ). Thanks:). Hanieh
First things first
Im not a morning prson. I wakeup(seperated) late around 9:00.first(first of teh sentecne write CAPITAL LETTERS) I wash my face and then eat break and review my english (English) homework.I get ready and go to english(??) class next.I come back home befor(spelling) lunch.
Lunch time
I alway eat lunch to home(to ???).I never watch tv(CAPITAL) while im(i or I ??) eating.I often do dishes right after lunch.
Evening time
I have some tea or guice(spelling) first and them takea long walk.Its my regular fitness program.
Icome back home ground 8 and do my homeworks next.I always eat a snack before dinner.
Dinner time
I watch Tv while Im eating. I talk (with) my family during dinner and do the dishes right after dinner.
Time for bed
I watch Tv(CAPITAL , TV) whit(Spelling) my family.I go to bed late. After I watch my favorit (spelling) soap opera.I never read when I go to bed.
Nazanin
Thank you so much Nazanin, nice activities during a day! Very enjoyable life you have actually! :d. Please like others go over your writing again and correct the mistakes. Thank you so much. Hanieh
Dear Hanieh, Here is about My routin life: First, I change my clothes as soon as I get home. Next, I listen to music during cleaning the home. Then, I watch tv while I'm cooking. Then, I turn on the computer after making lunch. I study english befor I go to bed. Mona
. Every year before Norouz we have spring cleaning. My mother is very neat, she always washes curtains tow (spelling??) times. After the spring cleaning, one day the weather was warm, I said to my mother :' Do you mind if I open the window' ? I thinked (do we have thinked?) my mother said no, and I opened it but my mother didn`t hear me! I opened my bed room (bedroom's ) window then we went to party and I forgot that closed it and came back late , While Some thieves came (came to ) our home and stole rugs,mom`s jewelery,my beautiful waterfproof watch and stuff like that... That was one bad and weired happening for my family and I know all of them were for my mistake
but I did n`t say anything to them.
Fatemeh - Shirin ==>>Thank you so much, it could have been better, but thanks, careful about the mistakes in ( ) . :)!
Last year in norooz, like every year, we hadSpring cleaning so we neated (neat is not a verb!!!) all the house.My mom bought newcurtains for the living room and bedrooms.We took all of our waterproof boots and clothes,and put them into the box,because we didn't use them in the spring and summer. On those days, I called my best friend and ask her,'do you mind if I borrow your jewelery for my sister's wedding party?' And she said "No.not at all". So I was glad and took her weirdjewelery and went to the wedding party.When I came back to the home I understood that,one of the earrings was lost! I was very embarrassed about it,but I called my friend and told her the truth. She said "Never mind.I didn't like those earings,my mom bought them for me." So I became happy and promised myself not to borrow anything from anyone.
MONA-ROZHIN =========>>>>>>>>>>>> SUPER DUPER STORY! THANKS TO BOTH OF YOU! I ENJOYED ALOT! Hanieh :)!
FATEMEH, SHIRIN, MONA AND ROZHIN : I am very very proud of you guys, no metter whether you have one or two mistakes, but lovely to see you try this much, I checked your writings at midnight through my cell phone and got sure you all updated this page, thank you very much, one mark for each of you for the final exam! Lovely! Thanks :)! Hanieh I am still waiting for Negar and Nazanin's short story! :)
Hi Teacher this is our story
Nazanin and Negar
My mother always keeps house neat and cleand clean she dosent like house tobe messy she always has a routing plan for spring cleaning first she cleans windows , curtains and living room she has weirdcurtain then , its my bedroom turn.;ast years I told my mother "do you myind if I help you to cleanin my bedroom." I started with my dresser.As I moved dresser to sweep the rug under it.
Suddenly I found my lost jowlery in a waterproof poket under dresser I have lost it 6 mounth ago and Iwas realy lucky to find it.
Thank you Nazanin and Negar :) very nice story!! really! well done! I enjoyed a lot! Some spelling mistakes but it is OK...:). Hanieh
Hi, here we go! Looking forward to seeing your postcards in here!h
Hanieh Akbarimehr ;)
Hi everybody,finally i understand how to write here!:D
Mona KH
well done you! :d
Dear Mom
I'm having an intresting time here in India,there are many great places to visit.
The foods are delicious and very spicy,I love their foods very much.The weather is nice and I think the temprature is about 18 degree Centigrade.The hotel is very beautiful and clean but it's very expensive!
Yesterday I went to a big temple,it was very crowded,a lot of indian people were there for praying.
Tomorrow I'm going to go to a gift shop,I want to buy souvenir for you.
See you soon
Mona
*Note comments in ( ).
Thanks Mona, nice job, just be careful about spelling and Capital letters, well done! It is a nice postcard note! Thanks! Hanieh :)
Come on Mona:) ,It's really fine, don't worry, just try not to repeat these mistakes again. c u tomorrow:)! Hanieh
Dear teacher
I correct my mistakes ,i think!
can you check it again for me???
Thanks alot!
mona ;)
It's checked now!! Just two more super easy ones! Pay more attention! :) Hanieh
looool.How about now???:D
Thank you so much Mone, it is fine now! well done! :) Hanieh
Mona
Oh my god!!I have alot of mistakes!:((
Mona
Dear Lila
I am having a fabulous time (time is C or UN?) in Turkey.
My hotel is near (Not necessary here) the sea,the weather is so cool and little humid.There are great restaurants
with tasty local foods and wonderful desserts.(I do agree with this part ! :D)
Today I `m going to water amusment park.I had a fun(glad is not a right word here!)time and i (again!) get a little sun burn.
Tomorrow I (?? CAPITAL LETTER) `m visiting historic district after that I `m going to (not necessary here, I AM GOING SHOPPING) shopping to buy souvenir.
see you soon !
Fatemeh
Note: My comments in (...) .
Excellent Fatemeh, very well-written post card, but just go over my comments and correct your mistakes with another color and then come again to check whether they were true or not. Thanks again, Hanieh:).we are
Thanks Fatemeh for the corrections you made, well done! Go over them again, there are some that you didn't found out. Hanieh
DEAR NAZLI
Im having a great time in Antalia .
We are staying in a five star hotel, near to beach(near beach) , weather is fabulous and foods are international and more delicious than i ever eat.
( more delicious...... correct this part please) The most delicious food ever! <<<=== you can say like this!Today my parents take (took) me out to a local restaurant.
Tommorrow(tomorrow) we are going to go shoping to buy souvenir and then our guide will take us to some historical places.
It's going to be a lot of fun .
See you soon .
Nazanin.
Excellent Nazanin, thank you so much, yours look like Fatemeh's, but that's fine. Check your mistakes out and try not to make those again:), thank you again. Hanieh
Thank YOU so much Nzanin for teh corrections you made, well done! :) Hanieh
Dear Hanieh Akbarimehr(?)
Im having a(?) intersted(?) and hobby(extra) time here.
The hotel is very greate and clean, the food in a (?)hotel and city (you need a verb) yummy,the weather is very good but a bit hot.
Today im going to shop(going to shop???) and see old place.
Tommrrow(spelling has problem) im going to hause(?) also going to park,Esfehan is a very beutiful city.
See you soon
I love you so much my honey.
Rozhin
Hi Rozhin, Thanks for your nice post card, just go over it again and try to correct your mistakes. I have written (?) in fron of them so that you will know where to change.
After 'dear' don't write the family name, just first name is enough. Thank you again :)! Hanieh
==
==
Hi my teacher, this is my short article about my routins .
After the English class I come back home with my Dad. ('I' IS ALWAYS CAPITAL!)
As soon asI arrive home I take off my outfit and winple(?? is this right?) then i wash my hands. I Help my sister to set (you need an article here) lunch table.
I eat with family and we talk or watch tv during lunch.
Then I take a nap before(spelling) that I wash(article??)our dishes.
I do my home work and study new lesson.
when I finish that, I rest for half or one hour , listen to music while i take (an article??) break...............
At night, I eat some fruits for dinner then I want (use another verb instead of prepare) to(....and the preposition) sleep, first Iwash my face and brush tooth NextIchange my clothes and go in bed.
Good night.
Fatemeh
Thanks Fatemeh, nice job, good usage of the adverbs but please go over them again, I have mentioned the parts you need to change in ( ). Thanks:). Hanieh
First things first
Im not a morning prson. I wakeup(seperated) late around 9:00.first(first of teh sentecne write CAPITAL LETTERS) I wash my face and then eat break and review my english (English) homework.I get ready and go to english(??) class next.I come back home befor(spelling) lunch.
Lunch time
I alway eat lunch to home(to ???).I never watch tv(CAPITAL) while im(i or I ??) eating.I often do dishes right after lunch.
Evening time
I have some tea or guice(spelling) first and them takea long walk.Its my regular fitness program.
Icome back home ground 8 and do my homeworks next.I always eat a snack before dinner.
Dinner time
I watch Tv while Im eating. I talk (with) my family during dinner and do the dishes right after dinner.
Time for bed
I watch Tv(CAPITAL , TV) whit(Spelling) my family.I go to bed late. After I watch my favorit (spelling) soap opera.I never read when I go to bed.
Nazanin
Thank you so much Nazanin, nice activities during a day! Very enjoyable life you have actually! :d. Please like others go over your writing again and correct the mistakes. Thank you so much. Hanieh
Dear Hanieh,
Here is about My routin life:
First, I change my clothes as soon as I get home.
Next, I listen to music during cleaning the home.
Then, I watch tv while I'm cooking.
Then, I turn on the computer after making lunch.
I study english befor I go to bed.
Mona
.
Every year before Norouz we have spring cleaning.
My mother is very neat, she always washes curtains tow (spelling??) times.
After the spring cleaning, one day the weather was warm, I said to my mother :' Do you mind if I open the window' ? I thinked (do we have thinked?) my mother said no, and I opened it but my mother didn`t hear me!
I opened my bed room (bedroom's ) window then we went to party and I forgot that closed it and came back late ,
While Some thieves came (came to ) our home and stole rugs,mom`s jewelery,my beautiful waterfproof watch and stuff like that...
That was one bad and weired happening for my family and I know all of them were for my mistake
but I did n`t say anything to them.
Fatemeh - Shirin ==>>Thank you so much, it could have been better, but thanks, careful about the mistakes in ( ) . :)!Last year in norooz, like every year, we had Spring cleaning so we neated (neat is not a verb!!!) all the house.My mom bought new curtains for the living room and bedrooms.We took all of our waterproof boots and clothes,and put them into the box,because we didn't use them in the spring and summer.
On those days, I called my best friend and ask her,'do you mind if I borrow your jewelery for my sister's wedding party?' And she said "No.not at all".
So I was glad and took her weird jewelery and went to the wedding party.When I came back to the home I understood that,one of the earrings was lost! I was very embarrassed about it,but I called my friend and told her the truth. She said "Never mind.I didn't like those earings,my mom bought them for me."
So I became happy and promised myself not to borrow anything from anyone.
MONA-ROZHIN =========>>>>>>>>>>>> SUPER DUPER STORY! THANKS TO BOTH OF YOU! I ENJOYED ALOT! Hanieh :)!
FATEMEH, SHIRIN, MONA AND ROZHIN :
I am very very proud of you guys, no metter whether you have one or two mistakes, but lovely to see you try this much, I checked your writings at midnight through my cell phone and got sure you all updated this page, thank you very much, one mark for each of you for the final exam! Lovely! Thanks :)! Hanieh
I am still waiting for Negar and Nazanin's short story! :)
Hi Teacher this is our story
Nazanin and Negar
My mother always keeps house neat and cleand clean she dosent like house tobe messy she always has a routing plan for spring cleaning first she cleans windows , curtains and living room she has weirdcurtain then , its my bedroom turn.;ast years I told my mother "do you myind if I help you to cleanin my bedroom." I started with my dresser.As I moved dresser to sweep the rug under it.
Suddenly I found my lost jowlery in a waterproof poket under dresser I have lost it 6 mounth ago and Iwas realy lucky to find it.
Thank you Nazanin and Negar :) very nice story!! really! well done! I enjoyed a lot! Some spelling mistakes but it is OK...:). Hanieh